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Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Alesha: I smiled. "What for? I really didnzt do anything." I giggled, bubbly again. "where are you headed?" I asked smiling. "Maybe I can help you and we can travel ...
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Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Alesha: I paled. "I...I'm sorry. I didn't mean to..." I gulped. "Would you like anything else?" I asked quickly. "Anything at all?" I smiled. Hurt was shadowed behind my eyes. ...
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Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Alesha: I sighed and looked at her as I took out a knife and peeled a peach. I reveled in the taste of fresh fruit. I smiled. "So...what are you ...
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Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Aren: I walked steadily through the day. I hated day. It was too hot. I growled and decided if I ran, it would feel good. I raced, turning into my ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Alesha: I glared, but put my bow away. "I don't like people messing with my mind." I tried to get her out. I hated my personal bubble invaded. I liked ...
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Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Alesha: I ran along the wooded floor, exhausted from lack of sleep. I came to an excluded pound. The water was clear and inviting. I looked around, training my ears ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Name: Aren Gender: Male Age: 20 Race: Warewolf Description: He has black hair and striking blue eyes. He's tall and normally wears clothes that can blend in with his enviroment. ...
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Re: Reborn, Vampires vs Werewolfs
Name: Serena Age: 20 Apearance: she has black hair, violet eyes. she's short and thin and always wears black. She's got a temper and hates the whole war thing. History: ...
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Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Brian: I paced outside the room. I felt tears streaming down my face. I walked into the room. "Can..." I sighed. "Can I be with her alone for a minute?" ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Greetings YWS!
Hey! Welcome to YWS! What most people do so that the critiquers donzt get overwhelmed is break a novel into chapters and post it by chapters. It helps the readers ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: The Pirate Ship
I like this. It's fun. And I love pirates. XD It doesn't seem long enough. what does the water feel like? taste like? How does the crew feel? are any ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Daughters of the Moon
Serena: "I love you, Statan." I said, smiling. Then I paled as I felt a hand on my shoulder. I felt sick. "Hey sis. Why don't you come with me? ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Daughters of the Moon
Serena: I smiled. "Now she won't. Nice warning." I said. Then I frowned. "Is she...I mean..." I sighed. It was silly to be jealous. "did you know she absolutely adores ...
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Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Amy: I blushed at the stranger. "It's nice to meet you. I'm sorry. I have to get this book edited by tomorrow. It's nice when guys are close with their ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Daughters of the Moon
Serena: I nodded happily. "But what about the others? there was a Follower in there. I don't think I can just leave them. and Collin...Collin will be furious if I ...
May 22, 2008
